Teh Wozzinator

I really liked it, but the grammar's already been taken care of (yes!) for me, so I'll just comment. I think that it's a good start to a story, it ...

this is a country-style song, so probably most of you won't want to read it...but if you do, thanks. Around This Wooden Table Verse 1 I was sittin’ at our ...

First reaction: EEP! I wasn't playing neopets... honest! Second reaction: Wait... this is in narrative poetry. Weird... Third reaction: *click* Fourth reaction: ...wtf? Fifth reaction: I'm married! So

actually, i haven't really read much poetry, but yes, i have read more classical...

sorry, i don't have time to post edits right now (i'll do it later), but i'd just like to say i though it was really good!

oh, and one thing i didn't say...i liked how all of your section were different lengths, that was really original, and good

thanks! i'm glad you liked it. what i was saying in stanza one was this: well, if you were paid, would you talk more or less? c'mon, it's an easy ...

"And with a whimper only it can hear, the world ends." i loved the first line, but the second just kinda dropped with a thunk . you need a longer ...

Two Cents If you had two cents For everything you said Would you talk more? Or would you talk less? If your thoughts were worth Each one cent You would ...

this was my favorite part! i really liked the horror part...but what three words were they repeating? btw, again, you got the calling part, i think that that's the thing ...

haha, i liked it, but as i said before, no time for a long chat--and you just read my single crit in the chat.

haha, nice job Matt--i wouldn't of done that well...but Snoink was part my idea. lol! well...wait, maybe i said spoink...argh...lol

wait, why is this rated PG-13?

"Night to me is scary Night isn't very nice It takes away what we love the most Which is daytime. " the first two sentences were great, had awesome rhythm, ...

her personality is good..i like how she's torn between being a villain, and being a nice(r) person. i think Jabber took care of most of the typos, and since i'm ...